I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). We're already hanging on a thread as it is!
The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version Whats wrong? "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. You love baseball. And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Some sisters those ghouls are. I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! Someone at front desk please respond." They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. No Such Luck part 2. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Lana said, glaring at her parents. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! One of the Boys alt ending4. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. White hair extended ending9. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. But right now, no! Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Also yes, this story takes place in season 5. ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! ", (Lynn starts running towards him. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game!
The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Just because of superstitions?! Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. And can you please unlock my room for me? Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. Rita pondered for a moment and then said, "Hey I know, why don't we make a quick stop to Aunt Ruth's and" Her idea was interrupted by Lori slamming on the brakes hard, jerking the van to stop. The important thing is that we learn from them. She whistles for Fangs. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Lori finished with. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? I was being a sore loser! Morag: is it now? [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back.
Loud House Alt endings Chapter 1: Butterfly effect alt ending, a loud Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. And with that, they headed towards the lobby. ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room.
No Such Luck Alternate ending (Good) - DeviantArt Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Rita: Kids, your friends are here. She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] I hate pageants! Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. We said we were sorry. Maybe I should just quit the team. Lincoln: Okay. Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! Ruth said, curious to where this was going. Look, I see sweaty footprints! Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. "Hotel security came up to the room?!" It was against the law. Bad. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). SQUIRRELS WIN! Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Rita asked. ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Trivia. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Lincoln: I hate this! Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here."
The Loud House: The Loud Luck (Rewrite) - DeviantArt Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. I HATE THIS!!! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Why do these three buffoons have the room. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there.
Luna spots Lincoln). Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. I hate fashion shows! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. Let me tell you this! Sam: Luna, I got your letter. With how much of a hatedom Lynn Jr got after this episode, I had to have her own up to her mistakes. Especially Lynn. ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! MY TROPHIES!!! Cuts back to now. I guess this proves it! (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Sweaty Pants here! Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! Just tell us and well let you skip it. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. All rights belong to Nickelodeon. Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). Lucy: Lincoln, stop! (Previously on The Loud House. Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Understood?!" Luna: That was rockin'. Lynn: HUH!?!?! I ADMIT IT!!! Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. ", (the sisters cheers. Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. "Not cool, guys." Thats not how it works! ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" This is a family moment. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lola yelled. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. Luan brought it. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] I hate presentations! Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! You can never come back. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. Lincoln: I said NO! I wonder if the windows are locked?" "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. And you better start talking now!". Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? I let my pride get the best to me! Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. Literature. My own family, locking me out. We didn't find any though." Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. Post an update . Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. "But you know what's not fair?" But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. How about i give you something new to explain! ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Learn more. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water.
No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . NOBODY!!! NO!" I need to hide! YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. See if I care! However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Its a stupid mascot costume! ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Luna: I dont know. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. Just so you know, in case you ask about that). They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. Here's another Alternate Ending. Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. Felix looked at the door and saw a number 5 on it. Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. I'm the Duke! When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Rita asked. "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." Except for Lynn). We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! In. In this Loud House Alternate universe a man made virus force's mankind to abandon earth.all except one 11 year old Lincoln Loud was accidentally abandoned by his parents and five sisters as an infant and was forced to fend for himself 11 years later Lincoln has adapted to his new hunting and gathering lifestyle and. Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers."
loud house alternate ending deviantart - segiteknoloji.com The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! I would feel awful if you did. (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. But dont worry, youre still a great writer. Not a loud alt ending6. "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! NOTHING!! And he did not look happy. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. ENOUGH!!! They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. (They arrive home. Then, he opened it up. Luna blushed. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. How convenient for me. Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. I'm not. As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. You're scaring even me. N Eddy's big picture show .
Nsl Stories - Wattpad I'm not bad luck. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. "YOU HEARD HER!" ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Lincoln: Alright then, call them. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! I'll keep it between the both of us. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing.
No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. He really doesn't like us at all does he? You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? I even threatened you to go to my game! ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general).